Rose @ Owairaka District School.
Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work. This year our school focus is "In Our Backyard". Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work. Thank you for taking the time to support my learning journey!
Thursday, 9 December 2021
My Music
Wednesday, 8 December 2021
witchcraft
Session 4
WALT vary our sentences
Resources: Room 7 Modelling book / Thesaurus
Motivation: | Paragraph: |
Day 1: Circle of flames It was the smell of smoke that drew him towards the door. | It was the smell of smoke that drew him towards the door. He had left his daughter allon for a few seconds dut nowe she was gone “aaa not a gen this is the second time and this time Rachil did it!” the girl's father shouts in anguish… |
Day 2: Journey through the mist. Time was of the essence. | Time was of the essence. I have to find my mum. “She had embarked on a journey across the ocean. And then she had gone to my house and hade me i hade be born with witchcraft because she was a which and when i was little she would tell me story about babalon a place she was from and then last week she said she had to go back to babalon because her sister needed her my mum had never told me much about my aunt and i was finally a beil to perfect the spall to find he and so that is why i am here. You're a great lesnar what is your name” “woff woff” “i think your name is… ruff” “woff woff woff” “so bo you know were my mum is?” |
DIay 3: Dragon world There would be others like them there. It would be paradise. | “I do but there would be others like them there. It would be paradise. ” The girl was not surprised that the dog could talk “ok then take me to her” ''you do not know what you are at risk of yug whichling… We must summon the dragon” (switched to the narrator's view) As the girl and the werd dog are riding the dragon over babalon the girl shut her eyes and looked threw her which site and she saw her mum… |
Tuesday, 7 December 2021
Thursday, 2 December 2021
my Aboriginal art
Tuesday, 30 November 2021
my story
Monday, 22 November 2021
my art
writing
Planning your Story
Characters and Setting
Protagonist | Describe your main character Titipounamu | The Titipounamu is a tiny bird and it forest green feathers on it’s back with a greenish white |
Antagonist | Describe the person or thing that opposes your protagonist | Cat’s. A ginger cat how like to chase birds |
Other Characters | Who else is in the story? | A tui how helps the Titipounamu |
Setting | Where does the forest look and sound like? | Evergreen trees all around the first canopy so dig the sky is not visible the in bird songs all around |
Setting | List some good words you could use to describe your setting | Dark, misty light, mint chocolate green, |
Get your awesome words here: |
hello this is my Titipounamu narrative writing i have not finished yet but i am excited to do more
bye
Rose
Room 7