witchcraft

 Session 4

WALT vary our sentences

Resources: Room 7 Modelling book / Thesaurus 

Motivation:	Paragraph:
Day 1: Circle of flames It was the smell of smoke that drew him towards the door.	It was the smell of smoke that drew him towards the door.  He had left his daughter allon for a few seconds dut nowe she was gone “aaa not a gen this is the second time and this time Rachil did it!” the girl's father shouts in anguish…
Day 2: Journey through the mist. Time was of the essence.	Time was of the essence. I have to find my mum. “She had embarked on a journey across the ocean.  And then she had gone to my house and hade me i hade be born with witchcraft because she was a which and when i was little she would tell me story about babalon a place she was from and then last week she said she had to go back to babalon because her sister needed her my mum had never told me much about my aunt and i was finally a beil to perfect the spall to find he and so that is why i am here. You're a great lesnar what is your name” “woff woff” “i think your name is… ruff” “woff woff woff” “so bo you know were my mum is?”
DIay 3: Dragon world There would be others like them there. It would be paradise.	“I do but there would be others like them there. It would be paradise.  ” The girl was not surprised that the dog could talk “ok then take me to her” ''you do not know what you are at risk of yug whichling… We must summon the dragon” (switched to the narrator's view) As the girl and the werd dog are riding the dragon over babalon the girl shut her eyes and looked threw her which site and she saw her mum…

Here is my planing.

Here is my writing i did. I wrote each segment once a day so i guess it took me 3 days.😜

Do you like it?

Bye

Rose