Wednesday, 24 March 2021

Poetry Slam Ako hiko

Hello this is my Poetry Slam
I hope you like it?
Bye

10 comments:

  1. Tino pai Rose. I love the way you matched lines of your poems with images. Are they all free to use images? You've also used some great vocabulary like mournful. I wonder if you chose the word tear on purpose because both tear (the drop of water) and tear (rip) seem relevant to this poem. Did you think about including your voice on your video? It would be great to hear your poem being performed.

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  2. Hello Rose! Mikayla here.
    I think this blog post looks GREAT!!
    Sadness is a sad thing. I like your images too. I like your music it really suits the sadness. Its cool that you made this in to a video!!!
    Why did you chose sadness for your poem??
    Blog you later!!! Mikayla

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    1. thank you for commenting on my blog

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  3. Kia ora , Im Emily from paroa school I love your work keep it up!!!!
    What was your favarite part about making you blog post?

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    1. Hi Emily
      My favourite part of making a blog post is doing the writing
      what's your favorite part?
      Bye
      Rose room 7

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  4. Hi Rose I'm Elise from your tui mai tui atu class I loved your poem It made me sad and what to cry it was great and it really was powerfull!

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    1. hi Elise
      thank you for coming on my blog👍
      Bye
      Rose room 7

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  5. hi Rose i really liked your blog post.that music made cry inside.what was your favourte part about making this?
    thx daisy

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    1. Hello Daisy
      my favorite part about making this was writing the poem😊👍
      Bye
      Rose
      room 7

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  6. Talofa Lava Rose, it's Dayelle from Room 23.
    I just wanted to say you have such an awesome poem! Also did you what is a poetry slam?
    Blog you later,
    Dayelle🌺🌊

    Also the only reason I commented on this post, was because it was your most popular post😆🥰

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