Thursday, 28 October 2021

The spooky halloween

The spooky halloween


Hi I'm Luna and I want to tell you about something  that happened to me.

Shall we start. OK then. Last halloween ... "Hi Luna." "Aaaa!" I jump around to 

see my bff Ashley (Ash for short.) "You ready to go trick treating?" Ash said

“Yes but can you not scare me like that next time?" "Ummm... no it's 

Spooky season! that is why we are dressed up"  Ash said mockingly. "OK OK. I heard that

there is a haunted house with lots of pumpkins" I said watching Ash to see her reaction.

(See I am not the type of person who likes to go to creepy houses but Ash on the other hand

loves to go to creepy houses.) Her face lit up with excitement "What are we waiting for,

come on Luna let’s go.” We got to the front door and knocked. A creepy voice answered

"Come in but I warn you, go separate or bad fate is upon you... find the exit and you shall

be granted your prize." We walked inside to see two doors. "We will have to spit up,"

Ash said while walking to one of the doors. I walked to the other and went through... I don't

know what Ash or me were going to experience but I knew it would be crazy. In front of me

was a long hallway. I started to walk but AsI walked down the hallway I heard an ear

deafening scratch! I realized it was coming from behind me! I ran faster than I have ever

ran. I kept on running but the screeches from behind me did not stop. My heart was

pounding like a herd of elephants. I did not dare to look behind me. I saw a door and ran

into it. I quickly opened it and went through and slammed it behind me. I leaned against the

door and closed my eyes trying to calm myself down. After I had calmed myself down, I

noticed that the screeching had stopped. I tried to open the door… It was locked!

Happy halloween everyone it is nelly halloween (on 31 October this week) so i decided to do some writing hope you like it.

What do you think is going to happen next?

Bye

Rose Room 7

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Rose, thanks for posting your spooky story! What a scary encounter, and you left us hanging ...! I really like the way you started your story as if your character was talking directly to us, the reader. You also used some great descriptive words like mockingly and screeches. It was great to see you writing about your heart pounding to show us how scared your character felt. I wonder if the screaming is Ash and whether you will have to find another way into the house to rescue her?
    Next time, perhaps you could add an image to your blog post to hook your audience in even more. blog you later, Megan : )

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    1. Hello Megan
      Thank you for comment and advise😊
      I will try to put a image on to the post.
      Bye
      Rose
      Room 7

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