Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work. This year our school focus is "In Our Backyard". Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work. Thank you for taking the time to support my learning journey!
Tuesday, 31 August 2021
Do all Volcanoes look the same part 1
Wednesday, 25 August 2021
my parts of a volcano 3D model
Monday, 23 August 2021
my play grand
What do you think about my work?
Friday, 13 August 2021
planing
Sentence 1 (character/scene) | He was running with his toy rocket in the town and his mother was holding his hand |
Sentence 2 (character/scene) | He had brown hair and he was wearing a play jetpack as he was running he sore a Coin Operated rokit |
Sentence 3 (Conflict) | It did not work haw he thought it wide so he earned lots of money |
Sentence 4 (Conflict) | He poured all comes in to the machine but it did it wont to work |
Sentence 5 (resolution) | But then it started to work and then blasted in tio spas |
Sentence 6 (how characters have changed) | The boy went from young to old to young |
Friday, 6 August 2021
my hundred word story
Sun was beating down like a ball of fire on a town in the bottom of akland. In a quiet street a boy was playing his favorite game. He was intent on winning his game. creek slam it looked like his mum was home she was coming over to where he was sitting. She put a box in front of him and workt away. the boy kept playing “why don't you open the presint i got you” “for me?”the boy said he started to open it and then a dog jumped out “cool” Then he noticed that the puppy was missing a leg. He threw it onto the ground but the pup found a red ball so it ran at it and started to play. He tried to convince the boy to play with him. It took a bit but he did end up convincing him. So he started to grab his crutches and you could see he was missing a leg too but in the end they are friends. |
The dog's perspective
I was living my normal life at the pet store when a human came up to me, opened the cage and took me out!!!. And worst of all they put me in a box!!!!! I was then (I think )
In a car it all went so fast then i realized that I had been adopted so i guess i am excited
Oo we stopped and my new human took me out of the car. I heard a door open and then closed and then pot me down. Finally hay homun i do get car sick so be careful. “Why don't you open the presin I got you” so now I was a presint “for me” my box started to popin so i jumped the box opened and I sorer a boy he looked like he was 12 or 13? He picked me up but then he looked at my missing leg and threw me on the ground the worst day ever! Ooo a red ball I ran to it and started to play.
hello this is my writing about the presint vid hope you like it.
what is your favorite book?