my hundred word story

 

Sun was beating down like a ball of fire on a town in the bottom of akland. In a quiet street a boy was playing his favorite game. He was intent on winning his game. creek slam it looked like his mum was home she was coming over to where he was sitting. She put a box in front of him and workt away. the boy kept playing “why don't you open the presint i got you” “for me?”the boy said he started to open it and then a dog jumped out “cool” Then he noticed that the puppy was missing a leg. He threw it onto the ground but the pup found a red ball so it ran at it and started to play. He tried to convince the boy to play with him. It took a bit but he did end up convincing him. So he started to grab his crutches and you could see he was missing a leg too but in the end they are friends.

The dog's perspective

I was living my normal life at the pet store when a human came up to me, opened the cage and took me out!!!. And worst of all they put me in a box!!!!! I was then (I think )

In a car it all went so fast then i realized that I had been adopted so i guess i am excited 

Oo we stopped and my new human took me out of the car. I heard a door open and then closed and then pot me down. Finally hay homun i do get car sick so be careful. “Why don't you open the presin I got you” so now I was a presint “for me” my box started to popin so i jumped the box opened and I sorer a boy he looked like he was 12 or 13?  He picked me up but then he looked at my missing leg and threw me on the ground the worst day ever! Ooo a red ball I ran to it and started to play.

hello this is my writing about the presint vid hope you like it.

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