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Thursday, 9 December 2021
My Music
Wednesday, 8 December 2021
witchcraft
Session 4
WALT vary our sentences
Resources: Room 7 Modelling book / Thesaurus
Motivation: | Paragraph: |
Day 1: Circle of flames It was the smell of smoke that drew him towards the door. | It was the smell of smoke that drew him towards the door. He had left his daughter allon for a few seconds dut nowe she was gone “aaa not a gen this is the second time and this time Rachil did it!” the girl's father shouts in anguish… |
Day 2: Journey through the mist. Time was of the essence. | Time was of the essence. I have to find my mum. “She had embarked on a journey across the ocean. And then she had gone to my house and hade me i hade be born with witchcraft because she was a which and when i was little she would tell me story about babalon a place she was from and then last week she said she had to go back to babalon because her sister needed her my mum had never told me much about my aunt and i was finally a beil to perfect the spall to find he and so that is why i am here. You're a great lesnar what is your name” “woff woff” “i think your name is… ruff” “woff woff woff” “so bo you know were my mum is?” |
DIay 3: Dragon world There would be others like them there. It would be paradise. | “I do but there would be others like them there. It would be paradise. ” The girl was not surprised that the dog could talk “ok then take me to her” ''you do not know what you are at risk of yug whichling… We must summon the dragon” (switched to the narrator's view) As the girl and the werd dog are riding the dragon over babalon the girl shut her eyes and looked threw her which site and she saw her mum… |
Tuesday, 7 December 2021
Thursday, 2 December 2021
my Aboriginal art
Tuesday, 30 November 2021
my story
Monday, 22 November 2021
my art
writing
Planning your Story
Characters and Setting
Protagonist | Describe your main character Titipounamu | The Titipounamu is a tiny bird and it forest green feathers on it’s back with a greenish white |
Antagonist | Describe the person or thing that opposes your protagonist | Cat’s. A ginger cat how like to chase birds |
Other Characters | Who else is in the story? | A tui how helps the Titipounamu |
Setting | Where does the forest look and sound like? | Evergreen trees all around the first canopy so dig the sky is not visible the in bird songs all around |
Setting | List some good words you could use to describe your setting | Dark, misty light, mint chocolate green, |
Get your awesome words here: |
hello this is my Titipounamu narrative writing i have not finished yet but i am excited to do more
bye
Rose
Room 7
Monday, 8 November 2021
my droring
Here is a drawing I did of a fantail. I used kleki it is a good drawing app it lets you create motabil layis.
I drew the picture on my mum's tablet I was not able to upload a photo so I draw it from scratch hop you like it.
What do you think of my art?
Bye
Rose
Room 7
Wednesday, 3 November 2021
Bird of the Year
Thursday, 28 October 2021
The spooky halloween
The spooky halloween
Hi I'm Luna and I want to tell you about something that happened to me.
Shall we start. OK then. Last halloween ... "Hi Luna." "Aaaa!" I jump around to
see my bff Ashley (Ash for short.) "You ready to go trick treating?" Ash said
“Yes but can you not scare me like that next time?" "Ummm... no it's
Spooky season! that is why we are dressed up" Ash said mockingly. "OK OK. I heard that
there is a haunted house with lots of pumpkins" I said watching Ash to see her reaction.
(See I am not the type of person who likes to go to creepy houses but Ash on the other hand
loves to go to creepy houses.) Her face lit up with excitement "What are we waiting for,
come on Luna let’s go.” We got to the front door and knocked. A creepy voice answered
"Come in but I warn you, go separate or bad fate is upon you... find the exit and you shall
be granted your prize." We walked inside to see two doors. "We will have to spit up,"
Ash said while walking to one of the doors. I walked to the other and went through... I don't
know what Ash or me were going to experience but I knew it would be crazy. In front of me
was a long hallway. I started to walk but AsI walked down the hallway I heard an ear
deafening scratch! I realized it was coming from behind me! I ran faster than I have ever
ran. I kept on running but the screeches from behind me did not stop. My heart was
pounding like a herd of elephants. I did not dare to look behind me. I saw a door and ran
into it. I quickly opened it and went through and slammed it behind me. I leaned against the
door and closed my eyes trying to calm myself down. After I had calmed myself down, I
noticed that the screeching had stopped. I tried to open the door… It was locked!
Happy halloween everyone it is nelly halloween (on 31 October this week) so i decided to do some writing hope you like it.
What do you think is going to happen next?
Bye
Rose Room 7
Thursday, 21 October 2021
What is Quality Blog Comment?
Friday, 1 October 2021
my children's book
Thursday, 30 September 2021
Tuesday, 14 September 2021
perspective art
do you like my art?
Bye
Rose
Room 7
Thursday, 9 September 2021
Rose Do all Volcanoes look the same slide show part 2
Rose To, too, two - Word of the Day
Rose Word of the Day - there their they're
Tuesday, 7 September 2021
Rose Mon 6th Sept Past and Future Volcanoes
Here is my past and Future it's not finished but this is what i have done. Hope you like
What do know about volcanoes?
Bye
Room 7
Rose
Thursday, 2 September 2021
owai news in the future
Tuesday, 31 August 2021
Do all Volcanoes look the same part 1
Wednesday, 25 August 2021
my parts of a volcano 3D model
Monday, 23 August 2021
my play grand
What do you think about my work?
Friday, 13 August 2021
planing
Sentence 1 (character/scene) | He was running with his toy rocket in the town and his mother was holding his hand |
Sentence 2 (character/scene) | He had brown hair and he was wearing a play jetpack as he was running he sore a Coin Operated rokit |
Sentence 3 (Conflict) | It did not work haw he thought it wide so he earned lots of money |
Sentence 4 (Conflict) | He poured all comes in to the machine but it did it wont to work |
Sentence 5 (resolution) | But then it started to work and then blasted in tio spas |
Sentence 6 (how characters have changed) | The boy went from young to old to young |
Friday, 6 August 2021
my hundred word story
Sun was beating down like a ball of fire on a town in the bottom of akland. In a quiet street a boy was playing his favorite game. He was intent on winning his game. creek slam it looked like his mum was home she was coming over to where he was sitting. She put a box in front of him and workt away. the boy kept playing “why don't you open the presint i got you” “for me?”the boy said he started to open it and then a dog jumped out “cool” Then he noticed that the puppy was missing a leg. He threw it onto the ground but the pup found a red ball so it ran at it and started to play. He tried to convince the boy to play with him. It took a bit but he did end up convincing him. So he started to grab his crutches and you could see he was missing a leg too but in the end they are friends. |
The dog's perspective
I was living my normal life at the pet store when a human came up to me, opened the cage and took me out!!!. And worst of all they put me in a box!!!!! I was then (I think )
In a car it all went so fast then i realized that I had been adopted so i guess i am excited
Oo we stopped and my new human took me out of the car. I heard a door open and then closed and then pot me down. Finally hay homun i do get car sick so be careful. “Why don't you open the presin I got you” so now I was a presint “for me” my box started to popin so i jumped the box opened and I sorer a boy he looked like he was 12 or 13? He picked me up but then he looked at my missing leg and threw me on the ground the worst day ever! Ooo a red ball I ran to it and started to play.
hello this is my writing about the presint vid hope you like it.
what is your favorite book?
Friday, 9 July 2021
Thursday, 8 July 2021
Awesome Wairaka legend retell๐
The legend of Wairaka | |
A time before this time there was a tribe cold the Ngati awa they were on a voyage there waka was humongous. the beach that they had ended on a magnificent beach with dazzling white sand there were pohutukawa trees all around so the men went on to the beach and the women stayed on the waka with the children. | |
Then a crazy storm came out of nowhere Tossing and turning. Wairaka thought the boat was going to capsize as the waves come crashing into the waka from the storm ahede. “Look out” she screamed “get the chelgren to the middle of the waka. I need to do something”. The wind blows in her hair. Moisture and static electricity is in the ear. You can tell it is going to be a big storm. she's panicking,her heart thumps in her chest like a stamped of elephants they started to drift towards big sharp rocks. | |
She freeze's, there are no men that is obvious but she wonder if she could use the padil,she start to reach for “what are you doing?!” called one of the men but wiraka could barely hear him so she pretended that she didn't here him wiraka grabbed the padil (to tuch apadil was conceded tupo for a women) | |
she screams “kia whakatane au i ahau” and posht the canoe to safety. back on the beach everyone was releve, you could just see it on their faces... | |
she could hear cheering and looked around and relisted that they wore cherin for her!? her father gave wiraka a hug and was proud. shye went on many more advehis but those are for another day but they did decide to live on the beach despite the weather. |
This is Wairaka legend retell i hope you like it it took a long time tome and i did enjoy making it.
Friday, 2 July 2021
Thursday, 1 July 2021
crazy quality blog post
Tuesday, 22 June 2021
24 Hour Footprint
Monday, 21 June 2021
Fresh and Smooth
Fresh and Smooth
Doing fresh and smooth was a one time expires. This week (the 14 to the 18) has been the most alive but most of all it was fun learning the dance.
Tuesday, 15 June 2021
Friday, 28 May 2021
toolkit tinkercad
hello look down
Friday, 14 May 2021
setting Descriptive Writing
I was pitchblak in the forest. It was the hour of the whithis but as i look at my watch it looks like it ben the same time for the last hour but i new my with was werking. The house looked creepy and i cold here a raven in the bake rand i was creeped out. My hasil nut here blow ind the whined, i am glad i am wearing my jacket, it was frising...
Friday, 16 April 2021
the coming storm
name mum, luna
As I look out the back window of the car you can see the sun through it...the it Is following us chausing us the… tsunami…
The day before…
I was sitting in my room reading my favorite book wenthe tv came on and i pot my bookmark in my book and went to see what was on the tv i workt in and sore i big picher of a snamy with the words get to hi grand “mum…” “get all your stuff pakt up!...” “mu..” “now” i went to get the biggest box and then started packing...
edinabit swimming
Hello on thursday I went to edinabit swimming . It was very fun there was a lot of races dut awer school did not win but we did awere best ๐